英語(yǔ)的作文和漢語(yǔ)的作文寫(xiě)法不一樣。
這是因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)是意合性語(yǔ)言,而漢語(yǔ)是形合性語(yǔ)言的緣故。由于這點(diǎn),所以寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文最應(yīng)該注意的就是要讓作文在意上表現(xiàn)的緊密。
就你所提的問(wèn)題來(lái)看,依據(jù)上敘英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的特點(diǎn),寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)作文常以三段式最為常見(jiàn),即首先談?wù)搫e人的觀點(diǎn);然后論敘自己的意見(jiàn),即點(diǎn)題,說(shuō)明你的觀點(diǎn);最后總結(jié)。這是相當(dāng)于論敘文(議論文)而言的,其它種類的文章也大抵如此。
不過(guò),你若是寫(xiě)其它論文或是水平層次較高的文章,當(dāng)然就沒(méi)有什么很固有的結(jié)構(gòu),也沒(méi)有必要。但是所有高水平的文章都是基于在一定的基礎(chǔ)上的。
一. 英語(yǔ)作文開(kāi)頭方式
1、“開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山”式
一般來(lái)說(shuō),文章的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)盡量做到“開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山”,即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話題,使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內(nèi)容。
① 對(duì)于敘事類的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對(duì)于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀點(diǎn),接著展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢)” 的開(kāi)頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回憶性開(kāi)頭
二. 英語(yǔ)作文結(jié)尾方式
1、自然結(jié)尾,點(diǎn)明主題
隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
To introduce myself(介紹我自己)
Hello,every one!(大家好)
My name is **** . (我叫****)
I'm a 15 years old boy. (我是一個(gè)15歲的男孩)(具體情況自己改)
I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(我住在美麗的Rizhao城)(你可以把Rizhao改成自己家鄉(xiāng)的城市的名稱的拼音)
I'm an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一個(gè)活躍的可愛(ài)的聰明的男孩)
In the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在學(xué)校,我最喜歡數(shù)學(xué))
Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well .(也許有些人認(rèn)為這很難學(xué))
But I like it.(但我喜歡他)
that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就會(huì)有害結(jié)果)
I also like sports very much.(我也很喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng))
Such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)
I'm kind-hearted.(我很熱心)
If you need help ,please
.(如果你需要幫助,就來(lái)找我)
I hope we can be good friends?。ㄎ蚁M覀兡艹蔀楹门笥眩?/p>
OK.This is me .A sunny boy.(好了,這就是我,一個(gè)
)
開(kāi)頭:Good morning everybody!It's my honor to speak here,and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about。。(大家早上好!能在這里做此次演講我十分榮幸,也很高興能跟大家一起分享我的主題,今天我想演講的是。。)
結(jié)尾:OK,thank you for listening,that's all.(好了,謝謝各位的聆聽(tīng),我的演講結(jié)束了。)我參加過(guò)很多英語(yǔ)比賽,而這個(gè)是比較常用的,也能體現(xiàn)出你的修養(yǎng),可以試試看哦~Come on!
萬(wàn)能開(kāi)頭 一篇文章通??煞譃槿齻€(gè)部分,即開(kāi)頭、正文和結(jié)尾。
這三個(gè)部分安排是否得體,直接影響到文章的質(zhì)量。 文章的開(kāi)頭一般來(lái)說(shuō)應(yīng)盡量做到開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山,用簡(jiǎn)單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談?wù)撌裁?,一下于引起讀者的興趣。
作文常見(jiàn)的開(kāi)頭形式大致有以下幾種: 1.開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山,揭示主題 文章一開(kāi)頭,就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開(kāi)頭是: I Spent my last vacation happily. 下面是題為"Honesty"(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開(kāi)頭:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開(kāi)頭 在文章的開(kāi)頭,先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。
例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的開(kāi)頭: The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回憶性的開(kāi)頭 用回憶的方法來(lái)開(kāi)頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開(kāi)頭是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4.概括性的開(kāi)頭 即對(duì)要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個(gè)概括性的介紹。
如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書(shū)的快樂(lè))的開(kāi)頭: People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5.介紹環(huán)境式的開(kāi)頭 即開(kāi)頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場(chǎng)事故)的開(kāi)頭是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6.交待寫(xiě)作目的的開(kāi)頭。
在文章的一開(kāi)頭就交待寫(xiě)作目的,如通過(guò)文章要表?yè)P(yáng)誰(shuí),批評(píng)誰(shuí),或說(shuō)明一個(gè)什么問(wèn)題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開(kāi)頭: In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 萬(wàn)能結(jié)尾 1.活動(dòng)類. Never before has xxx活動(dòng) been concerned much as it is today ! As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did something useful to improve ………… 2.好壞對(duì)比 Although every coin has its two sides, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages to cancel the long May Day holiday and shorten it into only one day. 3.父母幫助子女/老師幫助學(xué)生 As the old saying goes, “To give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; to teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime”. As far as I'm concerned, parents should help their children to adapt themselves to society rather than shelter them from what's going on outside. 4. 關(guān)注家鄉(xiāng),關(guān)注國(guó)家的發(fā)展 Personally, I am sure we can see that China/ my hometown is getting richer and stronger and the people in our /my hometown /country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. 5. 感恩活動(dòng)的意義/ I think this is a meaningful activity, which teaches us to learn to have gratitude for the people around us. Being grateful to others is a good feeling. With it we can know how to respect our parents, the elders and teachers. With it we can learn to care for others and forgive others. Only when we are always keeping a grateful heart to others can we harvest well-being and happiness. 6.社會(huì)公益活動(dòng)的意義 From my point of view, xx活動(dòng) is obviously more than just learning; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. That's why I'd like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By doing so, I feel I can make a small contribution to society. 7.學(xué)生健康 1. To improve students' health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health. 學(xué)生健康 2. As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life 8.環(huán)保類 As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did 。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my classmates are very kind of me。
有些編不出來(lái)了
一)段首句1. 關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。
一些人認(rèn)為…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗話說(shuō)(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3. 現(xiàn)在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來(lái)了許多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是…… Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.4. 現(xiàn)在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因?yàn)椤硗猓ǘ遥?/p>
Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 關(guān)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同,一些人認(rèn)為(說(shuō))……,在他們看來(lái),…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人類正面臨著一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題……,這個(gè)問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8. ……已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當(dāng)中,將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來(lái)越重要的作用,它給我們帶來(lái)了許多好處,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重 的問(wèn)題。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。
很顯然……,但是 為什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that ______ while. Obviously, ______, but why?(二)中間段落句1. 相反,有一些人贊成……,他們相信……,而且,他們認(rèn)為……。On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____.2. 但是,我認(rèn)為這不是解決……的好方法,比如……。
最糟糕的是……。But I don't think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___.3. ……對(duì)我們國(guó)家的發(fā)展和建設(shè)是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要 的是…… ______is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First,______. What's more, _____.Most important of all,______.4. 有幾個(gè)可供我們采納的方法。
首先,我們可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______5. 面臨……,我們應(yīng)該采取一系列行之有效的方法來(lái)……。
一方面……,另一方面,Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another, ______6. 早就應(yīng)該拿出行動(dòng)了。比如說(shuō)……,另外……。
所有這些方法肯定會(huì)……。It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.7. 為什么……?第一個(gè)原因是……;第二個(gè)原因是……;第三個(gè)原因是……。
總的來(lái)說(shuō),……的主要原 因是由于…… Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好壞兩個(gè)方面一樣,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.9. 盡管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.10. 完全同意……這種觀點(diǎn)(陳述),主要理由如下:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.(三)結(jié)尾句1. 至于我,在某種程度上我同意后面的觀點(diǎn),我認(rèn)為…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ……2. 總而言之,整個(gè)社會(huì)應(yīng)該密切關(guān)注……這個(gè)問(wèn)題。只有這樣,我們才能在將來(lái)……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.3. 但是,……和……都有它們各自的優(yōu)勢(shì)(好處)。例如,……,而……。
然而,把這兩者相比較,我更傾向于(喜歡)……But ……and……h(huán)ave heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……4. 就我個(gè)人而言,我相信……,因此,我堅(jiān)信美好的未來(lái)正等著我們。因?yàn)椤?Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is 。
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