總的觀點是不同意(不同意應該比較好寫吧)
一,開頭:當代電腦很流行,因此有人提議說……(題目),對于這個觀點,I find it ill-founded.
二,主體
1.讓步,電腦的正面好處
2.但是博物館和藝術(shù)館是不可替代的 原因1:精神因素,原因2:兒童教育因素(自己編吧,任意兩個合理的都可以) 這些都是電腦沒辦法提供的。
三,再次重申觀點
其實寫法很多,條理清晰既可,但能夠盡可能談到兩個方面,并發(fā)掘兩者內(nèi)在聯(lián)系是關(guān)鍵。
(我自己也不是寫作大師,雅思作文也只考了6.5,小小意見希望對你有幫助。)
很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段,有的會把題目原封不動抄下來,但如果這樣做,在統(tǒng)計作文字數(shù)時,第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了.實際上,大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,專家建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面: 1)場景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon. 2)一些人的觀點(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來安排. 3)個人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字數(shù)至少達到250字,在寫作中考慮到字數(shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完.因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況: 1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字數(shù)較多.這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(paraphrase),可以做: 主動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 主謂賓主系表 某些近義詞互換 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的觀點即可. 2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字數(shù)較少,若直接重新表達,字數(shù)湊不到40字左右.這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字數(shù): 把籠統(tǒng)信息細節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息.這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分也不會很高.。
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雅思大作文開頭段模板
第一大模板法:①引題+②一方觀點+另一方觀點+③我方觀點①引題:九大引題方法
一:①在談到……時,人們對于這個充滿爭議的話題所持的觀點各不相同。
①Whentalkingabout(/it comes to/it refers to) _____, people's opinions are divergent on such a controversial 有爭議的 issue. 有分歧的
二:①最近經(jīng)常辯論的一個問題是……
①A much debated issue these days is whether ……
①There is apublic(/general)debate(/discussion/ controversy)today(/nowadays)on(/about/ over/ as to) theproblem(/issue) of ……
三:①最近……的問題已經(jīng)引起了人們廣泛的爭議。
①Recently theproblem(/issue)of_____
+ hasdrawn(/aroused)public(/worldwide) attention.
+ hascaused(/aroused)wide(/general/ considerable/ international) concern.
+ hasarisen(/loomed up/ cropped up)as controversial(/as noteworthy/ more distinctly for settlement).
四:①近來……的問題已經(jīng)廣為天下人所知。
①Recently theissue(/problem)of ……h(huán)as beenin the limelight(/brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ posed among the general public).在公眾的注意之下
五:①在過去的……年里,很多城市面臨了……的嚴重問題。
①Inrecent(/ the past ……)years, manyci
寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素一:現(xiàn)象句
雅思寫作考題中會出現(xiàn)一個社會現(xiàn)象,考生的任務就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫,重述這個社會現(xiàn)象。 E.g.1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——套句+同義詞替換:more and more= a large amount of E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
主被動之間的轉(zhuǎn)換:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同義詞的替換:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying 。
個人覺得,自己看書不如找老師點撥一下,可以省很大的力氣,愛預科老師點撥專業(yè),雅思也有很多年的經(jīng)驗了。
我來寫個吧
In the present age, 。.. are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句寫社會背景想要介紹下不好的現(xiàn)象也可以這樣寫 In the present age, the issue of。 is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether。(這個地方寫要辯論的話題,改寫下題目好了)has sparked much debate. Some people argue that。. while many other consider that。 Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(后者)view.
結(jié)尾:
In summary, I would concede that。m even though。, Overall, I am convinced that。 should。
很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段,有的會把題目原封不動抄下來,但如果這樣做,在統(tǒng)計作文字數(shù)時,第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了.實際上,大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,洛陽大華雅思建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面: 1)場景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon. 2)一些人的觀點(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來安排. 3)個人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字數(shù)至少達到250字,在寫作中考慮到字數(shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完.因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況: 1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字數(shù)較多.這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(paraphrase),可以做: 主動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 主謂賓主系表 某些近義詞互換 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的觀點即可. 2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字數(shù)較少,若直接重新表達,字數(shù)湊不到40字左右.這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字數(shù): 把籠統(tǒng)信息細節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息.這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分也不會很高.。
這里有一些我以前考雅思時收集的小作文開頭句子的模版~~~
希望對你有幫助
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16 in the year between ```and ```.
17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.
18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.
19 the number sharply went up to ```
20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```
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22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of.
23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ```
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