我的英語水平不夠高,但是我的建議肯定沒問題:
你會漢語寫作么?英語的作文我的初中生活其實(shí)一樣簡單:根據(jù)你自己掌握的詞匯量來構(gòu)思這篇文章是第一位的。
第二點(diǎn),在結(jié)構(gòu)上完全可以參照漢語作文的結(jié)構(gòu),寫成幾個部分,輕重比例自己掌握好,詳略自己控制好。
第三點(diǎn),根據(jù)你的詞匯量和語法知識,可以考慮有意識地使用幾種學(xué)過的語法知識——比如時態(tài)變化,還可以有意識地使用一下一些慣用法或詞語組合的詞組。
第四點(diǎn),好的開頭其實(shí)不存在。一篇文章無論中英文,都是和內(nèi)容有關(guān)的。好比百度知道里好聽的、個性的昵稱不少,但是那些高分的知道高手卻未必都有很響亮的昵稱。如果你特別想要個好開頭,顯得不同凡響。那我可以用漢語給你寫一個,但是整篇的文章風(fēng)格都得按照這個來。
開頭:真的?我真的是初中生了?當(dāng)我拿到入學(xué)通知書的時候,我有點(diǎn)不敢相信自己的眼睛。因?yàn)榫驮谇耙惶煜挛?,我還參加了小學(xué)同學(xué)的聚會,玩的都是從小一直在玩兒的游戲呢。
參考譯文: Really? I really is already is a junior high school student? When I got the enrollment notice, I daren't even believe my eyes. Because it's just one day before afternoon, I have attended primary school party, play is since the childhood always playing the game.
結(jié)尾。不錯。我是初中生了。我的初中生活就這么開始了,我想,我的初中生活將會比我的小學(xué)生活更有趣,也更有意義。你說呢?
參考譯文:Good. i'm a junior high school student. my junior high school life is so, i think my junior high school life will be better than my school life is more interesting and more sense. you say?
水平一般,僅供參考。
我覺得要做一名合格的初三學(xué)生,要好好學(xué)習(xí),天天向上。思想要健康,做人要有修養(yǎng)。學(xué)習(xí)的時候要認(rèn)真,上課要聽講。生活要井然有序,不能拖拖拉拉。體育要好,多運(yùn)動。衛(wèi)生要干凈。才能成為一名合格的初三學(xué)生。
I thought that must be one qualified third day student, must study well, is upward daily. The thought wants the health, the personhood to have the training. Study time must be earnest, attends class must listen. The life must be systematic, cannot haul. The sports is friends with, multi-movements. The health must be clean. Can become one qualified third day student.
Basketball is a popular team sport played worldwide by people of every age. It's a game that involves shooting, passing, and dribbling. The goal of basketball is to try to score points against the other team by propelling a ball through a high hoop. While competitive basketball is primarily an indoor sport, played in a standard basketball court, less regulated variations have become more popular as an outdoor sport played among friends purely for entertainment purposes 籃球是一項(xiàng)集體運(yùn)動流行全球的發(fā)揮每個人的年齡。這是一個游戲,包括射擊,傳球,運(yùn)球和?;@球的目標(biāo)是試圖積分對其他隊(duì)的一個球,通過推進(jìn)高箍。雖然有競爭力的籃球主要是一項(xiàng)室內(nèi)運(yùn)動,打了一個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的籃球場,較少監(jiān)管的變化已成為更受歡迎的戶外運(yùn)動發(fā)揮朋友之間純粹是為了娛樂的目的。 I live in a new neighbourhood now. My family moved here a year ago. From then on more and more people became our neighbours. A big supermarket and more than twenty different shops have been set up since last year. An underground nearby is under construction. It seems that our life gets more and more convenient. It is said that many tall buildings around here will be put up. It is reported that a new park in the north of our neighbourhood will be built soon. What a green and nice neighbourhood ours will be! 鄰里 我住在一個新的居民區(qū)現(xiàn)在。我的家人搬來這里一年前。從那時起,越來越多的人成為我們的鄰國。大超市和20多個不同的商店已經(jīng)設(shè)立了去年以來。附近的一個地下正在建設(shè)中??磥?,我們的生活獲得了更多和更方便。有人說,許多高樓大廈在這里將張貼。據(jù)報道,一個新的公園北部的我們的鄰國將很快建成。什么是綠色和我們的好鄰居將!
記得采納啊
Life has been changing me
Having been through these years,I changed a lot. I'm no longer a little child who always cry but a kid with responsblity. Maybe I was once a lazy boy and was always complaining about the world which was unfair to us. But now things are different,I know we should depend on our own to creat, to change the world.
When I was a primary school student, my family and I took a trip to five cities which were in the south of China.
First, we came to Nanjing by plane. That was the first time I had taken the plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. We arrived in Nanjing in the morning. At 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. The food tasted delicious. In the afternoon we went to “Zhongshanling”. It was the place that preserve the tomb of Mr. Sugshan.
The next day, we came to Wuxi and then Suzhou where we visited the region of rivers and lakes of “周莊”. It was a beautiful and old place. The house there were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.
The fourth day, we came to Hangzhou where We visited “The West Lake. It was very beautiful and the water was clear . As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some beautiful silk and famous tea of “龍井”.
The last place that we visited was Shanghai. It was one of the biggest city is China. The night view in Shanghai was more beautiful than Beijing. We visited the TV tower of “東方明珠”. It was the third tallest tower in the world. Standing in the tower you could see the whole city. In the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. I was very excited that evening.
(1) Life has been changing me Having been through these years,I changed a lot. I'm no longer a little child who always cry but a kid with responsblity. Maybe I was once a lazy boy and was always complaining about the world which was unfair to us. But now things are different,I know we should depend on our own to creat, to change the world. (2) My classmate Zhang Wei is a "problem student".He always go to school late and not friendly to classmate.So he has a little friends. When he head teacher Miss Wei knows this student.She visit his home and his parents.At the same time,Miss Wei know his home things.and communicate with his parents. From now on ,Miss Wei and other classmate help him for study and life,and make him do your friends.He is so exciting. Zhang Wei study very earnest hard and mark advance very quickly.He become a popular classmate in his class. (3) Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.。
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