關(guān)于如何書寫 雅思觀點表述類文章的開頭,舉幾個比較常見的例子。
大家要注意在雅思寫作大作文開門尖山的開頭段中就把觀點很好的表示清楚。1. When asked about…, most people say… But many other people regard…as… I personally think…當被問及對……有什么看法時,大多數(shù)人認為……但是,還有很多人認為……我個人認為……2. When it comes to…, some people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but…涉及……這一問題,有的人認為應(yīng)該……另一些人持相反意見。
也許雙方的觀點都有一定道理,但是……3. It is widely acknowledged that…contributed to… Experts argue that China must introduce… But I doubt whether…alone will solve the problem。人們普遍認為……專家認為中國必須推行……但我對僅僅……就能解決問題表示懷疑。
4. An increasing number of people are joining… In reaction to the phenomenon, some say… But do they realize that…can also lead to…越來越多的人……進入了……針對這一現(xiàn)象,一些人認為……但是,他們有沒有意識到……也能導致……5. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and…我們國家(中國)如今面臨的緊迫問題之一是……6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…也許當今困擾國家的最危險的現(xiàn)象是……7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。歷史上,……的問題從來沒有比現(xiàn)在更加突出。
8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…也許現(xiàn)在是應(yīng)該重新考慮……的時候了。9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。
越來越多的人開始意識到……并不是幸福的惟一條件。10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…對人們行為的多年觀察使我能夠得出這樣的結(jié)論:……和……的主要區(qū)別僅僅在于……11. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards… A recent survey showed that…percent of respondents ranked…as their top priority, compared to…percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that…?近年來出現(xiàn)了對社會有害的……傾向。
最近的一項調(diào)查表明,……的調(diào)查對象把……作為他們的首選,相比之下,就在幾年前,只有……的人這樣想。為什么人們沒能意識到……不一定帶來幸福呢?12. I recently read a newspaper article on… The deplorable problem of…h(huán)as aroused public concern nationwide。
最近,我在報紙上讀到一篇關(guān)于……的文章?!膯栴}令人深感遺憾,它已經(jīng)引起了全國公眾的關(guān)注。
13. Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that…根據(jù)現(xiàn)有的大量證據(jù),我們可以有把握地得出這樣的結(jié)論:……14.Along with the development of…, more and more…隨著……的發(fā)展,越來越多……15.In the past few years, there has been a sharp growth/boom/decline in…在過去幾年內(nèi),……有顯著增長/激增/明顯滑坡……16.The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that…提出的充分證據(jù)使我們能夠合理地得出這樣的結(jié)論:……17.While the rhythm/pace/tempo of people's living is speeding up, a lot of changes have taken place in…人民生活節(jié)奏加快的同時,……也發(fā)生了很多變化。18.With the fantastic spur both in industry and its economy in China, the number of…is on the rise隨著中國工業(yè)經(jīng)濟的迅猛發(fā)展,……的數(shù)目不斷上升。
19.It is commonly believed that the rise in…is the inevitable result of economic development。人們普遍認為,……的增長是經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果。
20.In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in…最近幾年來,中國……有了驚人的增長。
俗話說“一天之計在于晨,一年之計在于春”。
雅思寫作的開頭段也有相同的道理,寫好開頭段對寫作整體的得分有舉足輕重的作用。根據(jù)自己多年的經(jīng)驗,給出了寫好雅思作文開頭的幾個簡單方法:很多國內(nèi)的考生受到寫中文作文或者傳統(tǒng)英語教學的影響,寫一篇文章的開頭段時總是想要盡力抓住考官的眼球,不停地擺弄自己還不成熟的詞匯和句型,結(jié)果非但沒有得到想要的分數(shù),反被考官倒打一耙。
那么我們要如何在最短的時間內(nèi),以最簡單以及最能得分的方式寫出好的作文開頭段呢?其實我們可以把雅思寫作題目中的提問方式分成四個大類:觀點類(opinion essay)、討論類(discussion essay)、優(yōu)劣勢類(advantage and disadvantage essay)和報告類(report)。每一種提問方式的題目都有自己不同的開頭段寫作方法。
Part 1 Opinion Essay觀察觀點類題目的特征,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn),此類題型的特征是題目有且只有一個觀點。而題目要求我們回答的是“同意”或“不同意”的觀點。
所以只要確定好自己的觀點,開頭段就可以寫出來。例如:Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.Do you agree or disagree?如果,我們選擇同意此觀點,可以根據(jù)“背景句+直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目+個人觀點”的公式。
These days,it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.(背景句)But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people's health.(直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目)Personally,I agree with this idea.(個人觀點)如果選擇不同意題目觀點,則可以用“although”的讓步狀語從句進行改寫,得到:These days,it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.(背景句)Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people's health,(although+直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目)personally,I do not agree with this idea.(個人觀點)Part 2 Discussion Essay觀察討論類的題目,可以發(fā)現(xiàn),這樣的題目會有兩個觀點,并且題目要求“討論雙方觀點”和“給出自己的觀點”。這樣的題目中,其實只用在開頭段中寫出背景句和轉(zhuǎn)述雙方觀點就好了,至于個人的觀點,可以放到personal idea的段落中。
如:Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs.Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.這個題目的開頭段就可以寫為:People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor,even for a minor illness.(背景句)But,still,some people assert that individuals themselves are supposed to pay for such fees.(一方觀點)However,other people disagree and suggest that it is the government's responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens.(另一方觀點)Part 3 Advantages&Disadvantage Essay優(yōu)劣勢的題目,一般而言都會給出一個現(xiàn)象或者是趨勢,這又剛好和我們開頭段中的“背景句”吻合了,所以在優(yōu)劣勢文章的開頭段的時候就沒有必要再寫背景句了,直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目就可以了。但是要表達出自己的“優(yōu)大于劣”或者“劣大于優(yōu)”的觀點,只需要用一句話就搞定了。
如:Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores.Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?開頭段可以寫為:These days,it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores.Although some problems would occur as this trend continues,I believe such development brings more benefits.Part 4 Report其實report最簡單,因為通常題目和優(yōu)劣勢文章一樣,會給出一個現(xiàn)象或趨勢,所以開頭段的組成部分就只有改寫題目。如:In many parts of the world,children and teenagers are committing more crimes.Why is this happening?What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?開頭段可以寫為:These days,it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is a most worrying issue of modern society.以上就是分享的雅思小作文曲線圖常用模板的全部內(nèi)容,對曲線圖的寫作步驟和常用的句型等都進行了描述。
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雅思大作文開頭段模板
第一大模板法:①引題+②一方觀點+另一方觀點+③我方觀點①引題:九大引題方法
一:①在談到……時,人們對于這個充滿爭議的話題所持的觀點各不相同。
①Whentalkingabout(/it comes to/it refers to) _____, people's opinions are divergent on such a controversial 有爭議的 issue. 有分歧的
二:①最近經(jīng)常辯論的一個問題是……
①A much debated issue these days is whether ……
①There is apublic(/general)debate(/discussion/ controversy)today(/nowadays)on(/about/ over/ as to) theproblem(/issue) of ……
三:①最近……的問題已經(jīng)引起了人們廣泛的爭議。
①Recently theproblem(/issue)of_____
+ hasdrawn(/aroused)public(/worldwide) attention.
+ hascaused(/aroused)wide(/general/ considerable/ international) concern.
+ hasarisen(/loomed up/ cropped up)as controversial(/as noteworthy/ more distinctly for settlement).
四:①近來……的問題已經(jīng)廣為天下人所知。
①Recently theissue(/problem)of ……h(huán)as beenin the limelight(/brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ posed among the general public).在公眾的注意之下
五:①在過去的……年里,很多城市面臨了……的嚴重問題。
①Inrecent(/ the past ……)years, manyci
考生在寫雅思大作文開頭時應(yīng)注意以下三大要素: 要素之一: Restatement of the Topic (雅思寫作大作文的題目都會給出相關(guān)情景或話題,在首段中應(yīng)先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。)
方法一:改寫。即按照雅思寫作題目所給的內(nèi)容,用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍,千萬不能抄襲。
但改一兩個詞不算改寫,一定要將整個表達方式改掉。 方法二:自己展開。
即根據(jù)雅思寫作題目所談到的話題內(nèi)容適當展開,簡單談?wù)勀壳吧鐣械那闆r怎樣。但不要談得太多,更不能偏題。
這需要大量的雅思寫作輔導,大家在私底下要勤加練習。 要素之二:Express Your Opinion (雅思寫作大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等,因此必須與之相對應(yīng)地在首段中表明你的觀點。)
方法一:中立觀點??梢哉f某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點有人同意又有人不同意等等。
較好的表達如I partly agree with the opinion expressed above. 方法二:一邊倒觀點。即直截了當?shù)卣f贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點。
方法三:不表達觀點。即不在首段明確地表達自己的觀點,但必須要先分析一下,在最后一段表明觀點。
方法一在雅思寫作考試中用得最多;方法二適中;方法三用得比較少。 要素之三:No Excessive Background (雅思寫作大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可,不要寫過多不相干的展開內(nèi)容,更不要將理由寫進去,否則主體段就沒內(nèi)容寫了。)
無論是大多數(shù)考生備考雅思的過程中,還是從歷年來雅思考試四項的中國考生平均分,都可以反映出中國考生在雅思寫作方面的薄弱。
因為寫作是最能體現(xiàn)個人的語言運用能力和水平的,所以不像其他課程可以通過短期的特訓得到很快的提高,而是要求考生花時間對詞匯,句型,語法等等內(nèi)容的整理,記憶,以及運用。在具體寫作的過程中,考生要遇到的第一步事情應(yīng)該是引言段的寫作。
俗話說,萬事開頭難。很多考生不知道如何開頭,浪費時間,導致無法在規(guī)定時間內(nèi)完成250個單詞的大作文。
其實,引言段可先通過對background 的描寫來引出話題。II Background 方法介紹總結(jié)歸納Background的寫作,認為應(yīng)該從內(nèi)容同句型上同時做到補充。
下面先介紹下擴充背景句的方法:1). 追根溯源法。即從題目給出的話題中找出這個現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因來擴展背景句。
這種方法適合大多數(shù)的話題,考生要盡量在考前做練習,這樣在考試就可以得心應(yīng)手了。請看下面的例子:There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (高分范文P76)這個題目中給出的話題是mobile phone,所以考生可以從它產(chǎn)生的原因來考慮,就是科技的繁榮,而科技的繁榮,手機的廣泛使用是在20世紀末,這樣背景句就有內(nèi)容可寫了。
當然要通過相應(yīng)的句型來寫了。如… (time) witnessed …這個背景句就可以寫成: The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.再看一例:Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?這題要求大家討論大學是提供職業(yè)技能還是傳授知識。
那從傳統(tǒng)觀點來看,大學是傳授知識的地方,為什么會提出要傳授技能呢,所以這里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已經(jīng)成為當今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大學就轉(zhuǎn)移到以傳授技能為主了。那當然還是要結(jié)合句型,這里可以用as 引導的原因狀語從句。
參考:As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.2). 重述法。即對關(guān)于這個話題的當前現(xiàn)狀的重述。
請看一例:Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。本題的話題關(guān)于壓力,那考生可從當前社會現(xiàn)象來考慮這個問題,考生不難想出當下對壓力這一現(xiàn)象的情況,即很多人都在承受著或多或少的壓力。
可用it is generally believed that … 形式主語的句型。參考: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from。
Have you noticed that。
.To this situation,different people have different thoughts.Some may。,others may。
..But is this social phenomenon as easily as we think?I don't think so.It can also reflect a fact.In my opnion,。..我想說,其實文采不是最重要的,它只是對你的文章起到裝飾的作用,重要的還是內(nèi)容本身。
Hope it works!。
雅思大作文開頭要素一: Restatement of the Topic 大作文的題目都會給出相關(guān)情景或話題,在首段中應(yīng)先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。
方法一 : 改寫。即按照題目所給的內(nèi)容,用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍,千萬不能抄襲。
注意 :改一兩個詞不算改寫,一定要將整個表達方式改掉。 方法二:自己展開。
即根據(jù)題目所談到的話題內(nèi)容適當展開,簡單談?wù)勀壳吧鐣械那闆r怎樣。 注意: 不要談的太多,更加不能偏題,與題目話題毫不相干。
雅思大作文開頭要素二: Express Your Opinion 大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等,因此必須與之相對應(yīng)的在首段中表明你的觀點。 方法一:中立觀點(即辯證表達)。
即可以說某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點又有人同意又有人不同意等等。 說明: 比較好的表達如:I partly agree with the opinion expressed above. 不要說:some people agree while others don'nt agree.這可不是中立地表達自己的觀點。
所謂中立,其實是辯證的關(guān)系!老外看問題比較辯證,一般不會一棍子打死。 方法二:一邊倒觀點。
即直截了當?shù)恼f贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點等等。 方法三:不表觀點。
即不在首段明確的表達自己的觀點,但必須有引出下文之類話來作銜接。 說明: 方法一在考試中用的最多;方法二適中;方法三用的比較少(不表觀點,但必須表明要先分析一下,在最后一段表明觀點)。
雅思大作文開頭要素三: No Excessive Background 大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可,不要寫過多不相干的展開內(nèi)容,更不要將理由(即主體段的分論點)寫進去,否則主體段就沒內(nèi)容寫了。
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