我來寫個吧
In the present age, 。.. are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句寫社會背景想要介紹下不好的現(xiàn)象也可以這樣寫 In the present age, the issue of。 is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether。(這個地方寫要辯論的話題,改寫下題目好了)has sparked much debate. Some people argue that。. while many other consider that。 Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(后者)view.
結(jié)尾:
In summary, I would concede that。m even though。, Overall, I am convinced that。 should。
很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段,有的會把題目原封不動抄下來,但如果這樣做,在統(tǒng)計作文字?jǐn)?shù)時,第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了.實際上,大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,專家建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面: 1)場景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon. 2)一些人的觀點(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來安排. 3)個人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)至少達(dá)到250字,在寫作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完.因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況: 1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較多.這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(dá)(paraphrase),可以做: 主動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 主謂賓主系表 某些近義詞互換 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的觀點即可. 2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較少,若直接重新表達(dá),字?jǐn)?shù)湊不到40字左右.這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字?jǐn)?shù): 把籠統(tǒng)信息細(xì)節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息.這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分也不會很高.。
When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ' pointless', in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.
這個結(jié)尾段落明確的提出了自己的觀點,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
總的觀點是不同意(不同意應(yīng)該比較好寫吧)
一,開頭:當(dāng)代電腦很流行,因此有人提議說……(題目),對于這個觀點,I find it ill-founded.
二,主體
1.讓步,電腦的正面好處
2.但是博物館和藝術(shù)館是不可替代的 原因1:精神因素,原因2:兒童教育因素(自己編吧,任意兩個合理的都可以) 這些都是電腦沒辦法提供的。
三,再次重申觀點
其實寫法很多,條理清晰既可,但能夠盡可能談到兩個方面,并發(fā)掘兩者內(nèi)在聯(lián)系是關(guān)鍵。
(我自己也不是寫作大師,雅思作文也只考了6.5,小小意見希望對你有幫助。)
When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ' pointless', in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.這個結(jié)尾段落明確的提出了自己的觀點,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
雅思大作文結(jié)尾段怎么寫招式一:回答問題 answer the question E.g.1 When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ' pointless', in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life. 這個結(jié)尾段落明確的提出了自己的觀點,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
雅思大作文結(jié)尾段怎么寫招式二:不要添加新的信息 not apply any new information E.g.2 Happiness is considered to be very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. 用1句話明確自己的觀點,幸福很難定義,可能有兩個因素起到作用。雅思大作文結(jié)尾段怎么寫招式三:2-3個句子為宜 2-3 sentences are enough E.g.3 Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want. 2句話,作者的態(tài)度很明確,學(xué)生不可能花所有的時間去學(xué)習(xí),否者就會完全失去對學(xué)習(xí)的興趣,所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時間。
一般在結(jié)尾段的最開始部分,考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個明確的信號詞,讓考官了解文章已經(jīng)進(jìn)入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句: 信號詞:Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall 句型: 1. it can be concluded that… 2. we can find that… 3. I think it is also important to remember that 4. the main point is to make sure that 5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that。
無論是大多數(shù)考生備考雅思的過程中,還是從歷年來雅思考試四項的中國考生平均分,都可以反映出中國考生在雅思寫作方面的薄弱。
因為寫作是最能體現(xiàn)個人的語言運用能力和水平的,所以不像其他課程可以通過短期的特訓(xùn)得到很快的提高,而是要求考生花時間對詞匯,句型,語法等等內(nèi)容的整理,記憶,以及運用。 在具體寫作的過程中,考生要遇到的第一步事情應(yīng)該是引言段的寫作。
俗話說,萬事開頭難。很多考生不知道如何開頭,浪費時間,導(dǎo)致無法在規(guī)定時間內(nèi)完成250個單詞的大作文。
其實,引言段可先通過對background 的描寫來引出話題。 II Background 方法介紹 總結(jié)歸納Background的寫作,認(rèn)為應(yīng)該從內(nèi)容同句型上同時做到補(bǔ)充。
下面先介紹下擴(kuò)充背景句的方法: 1). 追根溯源法。即從題目給出的話題中找出這個現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因來擴(kuò)展背景句。
這種方法適合大多數(shù)的話題,考生要盡量在考前做練習(xí),這樣在考試就可以得心應(yīng)手了。 請看下面的例子: There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (高分范文P76) 這個題目中給出的話題是mobile phone,所以考生可以從它產(chǎn)生的原因來考慮,就是科技的繁榮,而科技的繁榮,手機(jī)的廣泛使用是在20世紀(jì)末,這樣背景句就有內(nèi)容可寫了。
當(dāng)然要通過相應(yīng)的句型來寫了。如 … (time) witnessed … 這個背景句就可以寫成: The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone. 再看一例: Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion? 這題要求大家討論大學(xué)是提供職業(yè)技能還是傳授知識。
那從傳統(tǒng)觀點來看,大學(xué)是傳授知識的地方,為什么會提出要傳授技能呢,所以這里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大學(xué)就轉(zhuǎn)移到以傳授技能為主了。那當(dāng)然還是要結(jié)合句型,這里可以用as 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。
參考:As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career. 2). 重述法。即對關(guān)于這個話題的當(dāng)前現(xiàn)狀的重述。
請看一例: Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。 本題的話題關(guān)于壓力,那考生可從當(dāng)前社會現(xiàn)象來考慮這個問題,考生不難想出當(dāng)下對壓力這一現(xiàn)象的情況,即很多人都在承受著或多或少的壓力。
可用it is generally believed that … 形式主語的句型。 參考: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from。
很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段,有的會把題目原封不動抄下來,但如果這樣做,在統(tǒng)計作文字?jǐn)?shù)時,第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了.實際上,大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,洛陽大華雅思建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面: 1)場景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon. 2)一些人的觀點(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來安排. 3)個人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要. 大作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)至少達(dá)到250字,在寫作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完.因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況: 1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較多.這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(dá)(paraphrase),可以做: 主動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 主謂賓主系表 某些近義詞互換 Example: At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的觀點即可. 2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較少,若直接重新表達(dá),字?jǐn)?shù)湊不到40字左右.這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字?jǐn)?shù): 把籠統(tǒng)信息細(xì)節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比. Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息.這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述. Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生個人觀點即可. 另外,要提醒考生注意的是開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分也不會很高.。
幸福是快樂的根本,幸福是人生的指路明燈,幸福是人人心中的美好境界.幸福是快樂,讓快樂永駐人中.幸福是愛的港灣,可以躲風(fēng)擋雨,幸福是一副絢爛多姿的畫卷,使生活充滿生機(jī)幸福是快樂的根本,幸福是人生的指路明燈,幸福是人人心中的美好境界.幸福是快樂,讓快樂永駐人中.幸福在于爭取,幸福在于融洽,幸福在于心靈中的回憶.讓我們把幸福永留人間.讓笑容充滿大地.人的一生最快樂的時光總是短暫的.在我的生活中“幸福與我牽手”的機(jī)會也是很少的.對于我來說幸福一直在我的心中.像一朵鮮艷的花朵,綻放著,綻放著.香氣隨風(fēng)飄散.幸福是快樂的源泉.快樂是多種多樣的.人的一生都在為自己的理想而奮斗;而瀝經(jīng)心血.那么你想過沒有這是你的快樂嗎?我問過自己快樂是什么?我想了很久.快樂不就是自己的愿望滿足嗎?媽媽的一句話點醒了我.“送人玫瑰,手有余香.”對,這是一種無私奉獻(xiàn)的心這也是一種快樂.人不在于富貴;也不在于貧賤.只要人人有一顆善良的心,那么幸福就在你身邊.一直陪伴著你.當(dāng)你走在明媚的早晨,一陣陣清風(fēng)拂過臉頰.小鳥在樹枝上玩耍.小魚在池塘里嬉戲.使我的心情十分愉悅,這不是一種快樂嗎?快樂無處不在.每一個人都可以去看透他。
很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段,有的會把題目原封不動抄下來,但如果這樣做,在統(tǒng)計作文字?jǐn)?shù)時,第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了。
實際上,大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊,專家建議考生在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面: 1)場景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon。
2)一些人的觀點(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來安排。 3)個人觀點,這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)至少達(dá)到250字,在寫作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排,第一段最好寫3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完。因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況: 1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,并且題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較多。
這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(dá)(paraphrase),可以做: 主動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 主謂賓主系表 某些近義詞互換 Example: At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree? → The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的觀點即可。 2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點,但題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較少,若直接重新表達(dá),字?jǐn)?shù)湊不到40字左右。
這種情況下推薦以下2種開首方式來保證字?jǐn)?shù): 把籠統(tǒng)信息細(xì)節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息。 Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture。
其后加入考生個人觀點即可。 追溯歷史,過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比。
Example: International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems? →Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。 3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點,而沒有背景信息。
這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述。 Example: The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree? →In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。
另外,要提醒考生注意的是開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解,那會給考官留下極差的第一印象,而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了,最終大作文的得分也不會很高。
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