開(kāi)頭就用every family,lots of housework,learn to do,help,這句話
中間就寫(xiě)有一次,父母去接外公外婆來(lái)家玩。接著,因?yàn)榘职謰寢屢呀?jīng)去接外公外婆了,【你想讓外公外婆開(kāi)心點(diǎn),就來(lái)搞衛(wèi)生}(這段可以換成你幫爸爸媽媽
做家務(wù))最后爸爸媽媽和外公外婆回來(lái)了,看到房子這么干凈,便夸你,你心里很開(kāi)心(英文是:I feel very happy如果不是可以問(wèn)問(wèn)老師)最后用parents,be/feel,proudof ?
你幾年級(jí)了??、可以捉住sweep the floor或者clean the window,總之是關(guān)于do housework(做家務(wù))
Help around the house
I always help around the house.I help my mother with her housework.I like do housework very much.My mom always say that I do a nice work both at school and home.And she is very proud of me.I think I am good at studies as well as houseworks.Whenever I have free time,I will do housework happily.I think it is important to help around house too.Do a housework equal to exercise one hour,I think.It can makes our body stronger and makes our house more clean.The last but not the least,If we helped at house,our mothers would get more relaxed.
寫(xiě)好了,你也可以叫樓上的修改一下。希望被采納喔、
My mother is very tired after works of all day.So I decided to help my mother to do some housework.First,I washed the dishes.After do that I swept the floor.then,i poor the rabbish. Did all of that,I thought my mum will be very happy.when i was thought that,mum was coming,she was very suprising for my behavior.then i wash the bowls.mum was very happy.i kown that i did very well.(。
Why should kids do some hoursework?
I think it's very important and necessary for kids to do some housework at home.
Firstly it is because they just spend too much time doing homework without having any rest. Doing housework not only help them rest but also do some body exercise. Secondly, kids should learn how hard-working their parents are and thus learn to be grateful.
For me, I can do lots of housework. For example, I can do the dishe, I can cook, I can sweep the floor, and I can also water the flowers. What's more, I can set the table and so on.
我覺(jué)得對(duì)于小孩子來(lái)說(shuō)會(huì)做一些家務(wù)活是很重要而且很有必要的.首先,因?yàn)樾『⒆涌偸腔ㄌ鄷r(shí)間在學(xué)習(xí)上,做家務(wù)活不僅給了他們休息放松的時(shí)間,而且能夠同時(shí)做些身體的鍛煉.其次,應(yīng)該給他們實(shí)踐讓他們知道父母的辛苦.
至于我呢,我也會(huì)一些家務(wù)活.比如,我會(huì)洗碗,做飯,掃地,我還會(huì)澆花.還有,我也會(huì)準(zhǔn)備飯桌等等
I like helping my parents with the housework and I can do lots of housework. In the morning I often make the bed and clean the room. When I get home afte school, I often help cook dinner. Then I wash the dishes and sweep the floor. I often wash the clothes on weekends. I think doing housework can make me happy and help me grow up.
自己的習(xí)作,希望對(duì)你有幫助
一般來(lái)說(shuō)應(yīng)該背一點(diǎn)精彩的句式放在開(kāi)頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力,
讓他對(duì)你有一個(gè)比較好的第一印象,
在最后結(jié)分的時(shí)候把你的分?jǐn)?shù)向上靠
(不要小看這一靠,有時(shí)候1分就是天壤之別?。?/p>
但總體基本以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,
不要顯得太過(guò)于注重華麗的詞藻,
當(dāng)然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復(fù)合句的話就沒(méi)有這點(diǎn)條條框框,
主要是因?yàn)槿绻愕乃讲坏郊遥?/p>
容易出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法或句式的錯(cuò)誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說(shuō)的完全不正確!
英語(yǔ)的作文也是和語(yǔ)文一樣按評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)打分的,
不是只要語(yǔ)法對(duì)就好,
舉一個(gè)高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為例:
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。
2. 評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次
的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。
3. 詞數(shù)少于 80和多于 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
5. 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。
7. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá),對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
3. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
4. 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
6. 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3. 應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。
5. 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
6. 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第三檔(適當(dāng)):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
3. 應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。
3. 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。
4. 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。
5. 較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。
4. 較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。
5. 缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達(dá)給讀者仟何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無(wú)法評(píng)判;寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。
可能是你用的開(kāi)頭是已經(jīng)用爛的那種啦,
網(wǎng)上找找很多很好的開(kāi)頭的。
開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式
1. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一:名人名言
有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦!而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對(duì)吧?
經(jīng)典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
(適用于自編名言)
更多經(jīng)典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二:數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)
原理:要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。
原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的,其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式
1. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一:如此結(jié)論
說(shuō)完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差,等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō),開(kāi)頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion
that good manners arise from politeness and respect for
others.
如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”,但說(shuō)無(wú)妨,就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ):
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this,
thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can
find that…
2. 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二:如此建議
如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了,因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures
to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典,因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)常考這個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái),你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures
should be taken.
書(shū)面表達(dá) 1. 做家務(wù)有益于身心健康。
有些學(xué)生從來(lái)不做家務(wù),這不利于他們的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面 的提示,以“Doing Housework is Helpful for us ”為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,介紹一下做家務(wù)的好處,并號(hào)召同學(xué)們?cè)诩依飶氖乱恍┘覄?wù)勞動(dòng)。
提示:1. 做家務(wù)有利于身體健康;2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)之后做家務(wù)可以讓我們放松;3. …… 要求:1. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫; 2. 不少于80詞。 One possible version: Doing Housework is Helpful for us Doing some housework is good for us students. Every day we are very busy doing much homework. Some of us are very lazy. Some of us think doing housework is our parents' duty. So they think they needn't do housework. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework. We can help our parents to make the bed, wash clothes, clean rooms or water flowers. Doing housework is good for our health and can relax ourselves from hard study. It can also make our parents happy and make us love labor. What's more, we'll feel proud of ourselves. So let's do some housework every day.。
With the development of science and society,culture change ang develop,become more colorhul .For example, foreign festivals turning popular in china.…………
Generation gap is a usual problem.As children grow up ,parents get older ,generation gap
come up.And as time goes by,it becomes more and more serious .…………
There is no doubt that,"Failure is the mother of success."Success is fair, everyone has a chance to succeed, and the key depends on how to seize this opportunity.…………
不知道這樣可不可以。
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